Almost Mine - Dual POV - Distorted



https://www.wattpad.com/story/410708696-almost-mine-dual-pov-distorted

Premise

This is where the story actually becomes unsettling, not just dramatic. If Lizzie distorts reality, the reader should constantly question what’s true… and by the end, realize they’ve been manipulated by her perspective too.

a dual POV chapter-by-chapter, where:

  • Lizzie’s POV = intimate, emotional, unreliable, increasingly warped

  • Hanson’s POV = grounded, but incomplete (he doesn’t see how unstable things are becoming)

  • Occasionally: “Fragments” (texts, memories, contradictions) 

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